Editing Drawings as a result of In Class Critique

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It was suggested I increase the opacity of the book cover as it is quite dominant within the frame and obviously the walkway is off greater importance, with this critique I decided to remove the image altogether. The quote alone is enough to help communicate the concept of chance meetings and synchronicity. I also increased the opacity of the people inhabiting the space as it makes for a softer composition and the depth of the walkway behind can still be determined. It was also suggested that I continue the theme of water colour in association with the Clyde Quay/Oriental Parade location. 

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